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Narrative Review for Collective Retreats Website

  1. What’s the offer? Are these just stays or complete travel packages? Clearer explanations could prevent potential customers from leaving due to confusion over what they’re considering.
  2. The locations are stunning, but it seems like there's a deeper strategy or unique idea that's not fully articulated. Sharing more about this could create a stronger bond with visitors and explain your unique value proposition.
  3. Who is this for exactly? The broad appeal is evident, but without clear targeting, visitors may feel uncertain if the experience is right for them, leading to hesitation rather than booking.
  4. The website narrative lacks depth and excitement. Injecting elements of conflict or adventure could capture and maintain visitor interest more effectively.